Saturday, July 06, 2013

"That Tuesday Thingy" contest entry - Notes of the Heart!



This is an attempt at the "That Tuesday Thingy" contest organized by the lady blogger brigade  www. Indiblogeshwaris.com


Traveling through narrow lanes,
Greeting bright faces,
Walking through alleys of pretty smiles,
The heart beats in notes...
Seven in all, creating a symphony -
That dances in the tunnels of senses.
Memories, moments and magic
All woven in simple complexity
Of these septenary notes,
Create ripples of vibrance
That murmur an elixir knit in acoustic,
Speaking in melody.
The shades of life -
Thus spring to a new essence
Tapping the soul
To the tune of 
Eternal bliss. 


7 comments:

  1. Wow Laxmi, so simply put and yet so effective. These lines are wonderful. A manifestation of who we ought to be. Well done. Good luck for the contest.

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  2. Yes, this music is joyous and uplifting isn't it

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  3. Notes of music interwoven inextricably with moments of life.
    "Speaking in melody.
    The shades of life -"
    That says it, I guess :)

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  4. My favorite lines:
    Traveling through narrow lanes,
    Greeting bright faces,
    Walking through alleys of pretty smiles,
    The heart beats in notes...
    and
    Memories, moments and magic
    All woven in simple complexity
    The use of 'simple complexity' reminds of a similar use of two different words in a story I once read, 'horribly good'. They were used to describe the traits of a girl.

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  5. You have blended this so well...am loving every post here.

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  6. I was lost in your symphony. <3

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