Once upon a foggy morning,
Obliquely, you appear
Overlaid on a shell of haze.
Opacity of ignorance
Oppresses the zeal to seek you,
Only to make the mind
Occupied otherwise.
Offering scope, you linger around,
Obliging that favor.
Oblivious, the eyes blocks the image,
Obscurely, you slip by,
Off and away.
Overcome by the rush to attain,
Option to choose you goes ignored.
Open up your gateway, yet again,
Obviously, please occur afresh!
Great :) is it opportunity or is it rain . Both sound same :D A rain of opportunities wud be grt
ReplyDeleteIt is difficult...i admit... with all 'O's :)Good work :)
ReplyDeleteAn Outstanding Ovation is what you deserve!! :)
ReplyDeleteI agree totally with Shilpa. You deserve an OUTstanding Ovation. We all know the words in your poems. THey are part of all dictionaries. But how you string them together and make it look so effortless, there lies your gift. I shall miss reading these on May 1.
ReplyDeleteOOOO this is my wide open mouth at your talent :)
ReplyDeleteoutstanding Ovation and ooo lala for the poetry.
ReplyDeleteOpportunity to dance in the rain maybe ;) I like this and makes me ooooooooo :D
ReplyDeletePhenoMenon
http://capturedalive.wordpress.com/2013/04/17/orange-orb/
(w)Onderful!
ReplyDeleteLoves the personification of Opportunity!
ReplyDeleteWow I am falling in love with this "Opportunity" guy :) Over and Over again :)Hugs to you L :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent description of opportunity!! Bravo!
ReplyDeleteFirst time visitor to your site. Beautiful!! A very appropriate composition of o's. Kudos.
ReplyDeleteThis time I pick up Opacity of ignorance to take with me. Lovely words.
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