Musical stream of crystal waters
Meeting the mighty ocean,
Mountains high and giant,
Mating the intense clouds.
Myriad of colorful blooms
Mixing with Muggy brown mud,
Melting fragrant wax,
Mingling with the flare of light,
Misty dew drops, snuggling with leaves,
Maple syrup soaking, moist pan cakes,
Mint ice-cream with chocolate chips...
Many pairs, blissfully united,
March hand in hand,
Medley of thoughts, forming the
Mosaic of expression,
Manifest into sundry designs,
Mundane images materialize into
Magical depictions - But
Merging with melancholy
My verse gets misty,
Missing your mellow touch, O
Mysterious emotion!
Motivate the muffled deliberation,
Muted in numb silence,
Mask this mayhem with your
Merry revelation.
Missing his mellow touch ! :P :P
ReplyDeleteMagnificent ! ;)
I loved this merry revelation :D
Thanks Supremo :-);-)
DeleteAll your favorite things with that touch of melancholy at the end ...yet once again getting back to a merry epiphany ...read like "These are a few of my favorite things" from Sound of Music with your very special touch :)
ReplyDeleteHmm...another way of looking at it Sri - I wanted to write something else and then suddenly the word 'mayhem' came up in the mind - I was so desperate to use it, so took a detour, and ended it that way ;-) Now don't ask me what I wanted to write about :-P
DeleteFor one who was stuck for 'M' you did marvelously well, my dear! :)
ReplyDeleteYou think so Corinne? I still think it was bumpy and kind of misplaced! :-)
DeleteWah wah ..loved it !
ReplyDelete:-) Thank you Ruchira.
DeleteAh, today you mix the sublime with the gastronomical!! Lovely!!
ReplyDeleteRoshni - are you sure it is lovely? LOL hodgepodge happens when you are clueless/desperate. BTW, have you ever figured out mint choco chip icecream? Personally, I think it is the weirdest marriage! :-)
DeleteMystified how marvellously you meshed together your merry revelation!
ReplyDeleteIt was more of a mortifying experience for me Suzy, but as always, you all congregate to convince me otherwise. Eternally grateful for your love and support, if anything, it is all this applause that keeps me going :)
DeleteMarhaba! I have to look at other languages now, you are kinda finishing all the words I know in English :)
ReplyDelete:-) I don't know what to say Gee, you are so kind! :)
Deleteit feels like you want to reveal many things with in these words ! Lovely
ReplyDeleteIt is all the challenge Afshan and the company I have in here, that makes me want to say so many things :-)
DeleteOhh My God!! How on earth can you write like that!! Stunning..
ReplyDeleteBhavya
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No clue Bhavya - thanks for stopping by, thanks for the kind words :)
DeleteA medley Of Ms :)
ReplyDelete:) thanks.
DeleteI am keen to know about the time you take to write such fab verses!!
ReplyDeleteIt varies Shilpa, usually, the ideas take longer to come by, but when inspiration strikes, it comes out pretty easily. Often times, I get tempted to use some other words which don't start with the theme letter to keep the emotion flowing well...but this pattern pushes my limits, in a good way, I realized after coming along this far - otherwise, I have only a handful of words that I seem to repeat in all my works.
DeleteEvery day your poems manage the impossible, as they string together "mundane images" and transform them into "magical depictions."
ReplyDeleteThank you my love! :) It feels great when someone you look up to has nice things to say about you.
DeleteI don't have words to praise you any more :) marvelous.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sulekkha, have to add, your parents named you so aptly!
DeleteMarveling at your block!!! Kudos.
ReplyDelete:-) Thank you Janu.
DeleteI have to agree with Corinne and BlogwatiGee!
ReplyDeleteI have made up my mind that you are indeed going to finish this challenge the same way! Kudos.
Thanks for the blessings Shail - I need reassurances badly! :)
DeleteYou've floored me yet again, Aarti's Mom!
ReplyDeleteThank you Nandana - I just love stopping by to read your ponders. Keep it up kiddo!
Deletemighty,magical & a merry revelation indeed this post is laxmi !
ReplyDeleteMagnificently marvelous!
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