This is an attempt at the "That Tuesday Thingy" contest organized by the lady blogger brigade www. Indiblogeshwaris.com
Traveling through narrow lanes,
Greeting bright faces,
Walking through alleys of pretty smiles,
The heart beats in notes...
Seven in all, creating a symphony -
That dances in the tunnels of senses.
Memories, moments and magic
All woven in simple complexity
Of these septenary notes,
Create ripples of vibrance
That murmur an elixir knit in acoustic,
Speaking in melody.
The shades of life -
Thus spring to a new essence
Tapping the soul
To the tune of
Eternal bliss.
Wow Laxmi, so simply put and yet so effective. These lines are wonderful. A manifestation of who we ought to be. Well done. Good luck for the contest.
ReplyDeleteYes, this music is joyous and uplifting isn't it
ReplyDeleteNotes of music interwoven inextricably with moments of life.
ReplyDelete"Speaking in melody.
The shades of life -"
That says it, I guess :)
My favorite lines:
ReplyDeleteTraveling through narrow lanes,
Greeting bright faces,
Walking through alleys of pretty smiles,
The heart beats in notes...
and
Memories, moments and magic
All woven in simple complexity
The use of 'simple complexity' reminds of a similar use of two different words in a story I once read, 'horribly good'. They were used to describe the traits of a girl.
You have blended this so well...am loving every post here.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem !
ReplyDeleteI was lost in your symphony. <3
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