Cuddle up with me,
Comforting my damp, dark being
circled with your dainty spark!
Cloud I am - be my silver lining!
Console my grief, in your lovely light!
Can I count the ways I love you?
Cobwebs of your thoughts,
Capture my every breath..
Cares melt like snow into
Creeks of joy,
Crooning happy tunes, Just
Chime in with your company!
Come in, let my insides bloom
Coated in you colors of glee -
Co-star in my fairy tale -
Consider me, give me a try!
Charm me with your sizzling gaze!
Choking emotions coldly emerge,
Crevices of the heart let out a cry!
Coping with the void you left!
Call me into your comforting embrace,
Complete me like you only can.
Coupled with you, life comes to life
Concealing my every care -
Carefully wrapped, never to be back.
Clad in your constant dreams,
Carefree heart sprouts cheerful smiles
Content like a happy child!!
P S - (But to tell the truth, I was so tempted to call it C for Corny ;-)
Not corny at all, this is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!!
ReplyDeleteAww...Cindy, Thanks!
Deletewow- you have a way with the words laxmi ; 'cloud i am- be my silver lining' the line just stood out. applause
ReplyDeleteThanks Priya:-)
DeleteCo-star in my fairy tale - that summed it up for me. Very nicely written. loved it.
ReplyDelete:-) Thank u Suzy!
Deleteso many words with "C" and so much to say with all these words !!
ReplyDeleteU r for sure weaving magic
All the best
Aww..Magical comment! I'll skip dinner tonight! :-) Thank you.
DeleteCommendable. Couldn't be better :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Gee...:-)
DeleteCreative and classy! You are amazing with words, Laxmi :)
ReplyDeleteShilpa, you are a sweetheart! Thank you:-)
DeleteContent like happy child .... that's a perfect simile ;)
ReplyDeleteIsn't it Meera? Thanks for sto
DeleteContent like happy child ... perfect simile
ReplyDeleteThis is so very cute and romantic.
ReplyDeletefavorite lines,
Cloud I am - be my silver lining!
Console my grief, in your lovely light!
:-) Mine too Preetilata - Thanks for stopping by!
Deleteamazing how you do this so effortlessly!
ReplyDeleteThe audience inspire me to Roshni - Thanks for your kind words.
DeleteThis is a romantic poem, not at all corny. Adore it.
ReplyDelete:-) Awww...Thank you Sulekha.
DeleteC for Cute..and C reminds me of my fav. song..Could I have this Kiss... :D
ReplyDelete(c)udos! :P
Aww...will check out the song! Thanks for stopping by
DeleteAww .. that a sweet one ! I so look forward to your poems everyday !
ReplyDeleteHugs Ruchira - you just made my day! :-)
Deletesweet poem!
ReplyDeletewe need more corny!!
HA HA, you might get what you ask for ;-) thank you for the kind words!
DeleteSuper! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks VIdya:)
DeleteLove is such a Cushion! :)
ReplyDeleteIt certainly is :-)
DeleteCaptivating and sensual ...you had me hooked with this one :)
ReplyDeleteAww..thank u Sridevi garu :-)
DeleteIt's lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Janu :-)
DeleteHello. I loved the poem. What more can I say. Thank you. A lover of verse. Ruby
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Ruby, visited your blog...inspiring! I hope to age like you:-)
DeleteThis one is really awesome. I am so much in love with the phrases you have come up with.
ReplyDelete"Co-star in my fairy tale"
"Cloud I am - be my silver lining!"
Lovely, just lovely!
If I were a man, I would have choked to tears reading these lines. :-D Haven't read anything better since a while. My idol :-D
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