Fighting to get you out,
Faint thoughts, reeling in my head, like a
Ferris wheel's generous spins.
Freeze for a moment, let me
Fathom the fragments of your form,
Flash again, your flecks -
For a longer second.
Fixed on the fringes of your
Full-length image, I can
Fuel my fragile facilities,
Freely graze on your fiery fabric,
Focus and forge, force and feign
Fairly fine lines -
Forming a facade to
Falsely flatter my failing skills,
Feeling fulfilled for a funny verse!
Nice...I can see those ideas churning in your head! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Corinne:-)
DeleteAnd, you say this is effortless! Wow! :)
ReplyDeleteWell, compared to E it was...it really came out in one go. Sometimes it just happens, sometimes it never happens no matter what! KWIM?? ;-)
DeleteKWYM!
DeleteWow! How do you write this?
ReplyDeleteThe pressure is mounting...I dunno how far I can keep the pattern - I can see some really challenging letters ahead for this kind of treatment..Thank for the Wow..I personally thought it was very lame ;-)
Deletecool; surely this must have taken a little effort ? loved this laxmi !
ReplyDeleteNada...no writer's block today, now E was a completely different animal! LOL - Thanks for stopping by Priya:-)
DeleteFantastic :) I thought you were talking about childbirth, writing is like that sometimes eh?
ReplyDeleteLook forward to the rest of the alphabets.
Oh yeah...nice way of looking at writing :-) thanks for stopping by :)
DeleteFantabulous! I'm running out of words to comment now!
ReplyDeleteAww..thank u Gee:-)
DeleteWay to go Laxmi. I am rooting for you to do all the twenty six letters this way.
ReplyDeleteAs much as I can Shail. Trying not to think too much about the harder letters ;-) thank you so much for the encouragement-)
DeleteI have no idea how you do it!
ReplyDeleteHonestly Cindy, that is two of us ;-)
DeleteU r a magician with words !
ReplyDeleteLike ur unique style
Aww...you are very generous with praise buddy :-)
DeleteLoved the imagery of the thoughts going round like a ferris wheel. Very nice.
ReplyDelete:-) Thank you Suzy :-)
DeleteFiery , fantastic and fun ! as usual loved it :)
ReplyDelete:-) Thank you Sir. And thank you for the lovely message spread through your F post.
DeleteFaint thoughts, reeling in my head, like a
ReplyDeleteFerris wheel's generous spins.
Today, these lines were my favorite.
Damyanti @Daily(w)rite
Co-host, A to Z Challenge 2013
Twitter: @AprilA2Z
#atozchallenge
Thanks for the encouragement, thanks for co-hosting A-Z. I am having so much fun doing this:-)
DeleteWow! How on earth do you write stuff like this? Since I am at home, I actually read the lines out loud. It is even more fun that way. You are truly a wizard with verse.
ReplyDeleteWow...that is one of the best things I'd heard about my verse - and coming from you (since I am a big fan of your style), it is a huge compliment. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteWow, that's a lot of F words, great job!
ReplyDeleteKathy at Oak Lawn Images
Thanks Kathy, for stopping by!
DeleteFAB! Fantastic and completely floored!
ReplyDeleteFloored I am as well - for your kind praise:-)
DeleteWow, impressed...you weave magic with those lines!
ReplyDeleteAww...girlie:-) It is nice to see young writers such as you on the blogging scene. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteWow,way to tackle these letters, first time I stopped by on the A-Z Challenge and I can't wait to see you tackle the rest of the alphabet. Lucy from Lucy's Reality
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Lucy - Checking out your blog :-)
Deletefreaking fantastic :D
ReplyDeleteFlattered and floating (in the air;-)) Thanks much for treading this way:-)
DeleteSuch beautiful words in poetry..you weaved magic!
ReplyDeleteAww..You made my day:-) Thanks for stopping by Naina.
DeleteI can see you enjoy this! Focus and forge, yes. That's my takeaway!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kind words and for stopping by Vidya :-)
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