Tuesday, April 09, 2013

Day 9 - I for Insane.


Intense cogitation,

Intended to express the musing,

I linger around, the reflection.

Incomplete, the inspiration feels, In the

Impediment of articulation.

Imagery germinating in the soil of feelings

Immensely turmoils the insides,

In a fight to unfold the ode.

I know not the means, I know not the course, To

Ignite those sprouts into full blown foliage,

Intricately weaving around the trellis of the heart!

Illuminate my inner dwelling, to

Illustrate in palpable scribble, the

Infinity of your influence,

Invading the inherent harmony.

Infuse the apt intonation, lest

In translation, the profundity would be lost!

38 comments:

  1. The agony of every compulsive scribbler so intricately interwoven ! :)

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  2. Sounds like my scribbles - sprouts and folliage and trellis. How cool to bring this out like that.

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    1. Aww..Thank you for liking it and stopping by every day :-)

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  3. Interesting too. :)

    -A fellow Blogger from A to Z!

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  4. Illustrious company, this.....and you are still going strong!

    Your words are something I look forward to every day!

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  5. Whoa...so many 'I' s...complete justice to the theme :)

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  6. Impressive and interesting, yet again! :)

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    1. Shilpa, Thanks for the kind words and stopping by!

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  7. Another nice poem..I liked ur choice of words and their link with the theme!

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  8. now am really falling short of words :-o
    Intelligently done :)
    High time I copy ur words and track them for future use
    GOod day :)

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    1. You flatter me darling :-)

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  9. interesting post ! thanks for sharing!!

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    1. Thanks for stopping by:-)

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  10. Wow! Your thoughts, scribbles and words do grow.....and bloom!

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    1. Absolute honor Corinne:-)

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  11. Innovative and interesting, beautiful I post.

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  12. Writing about a topic so beautifully while working within the confines of a single letter is a huge challenge, and you pull it off every single day. A pat on the back for you and a hug.

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    1. It is stressful to think about it in the confinements, but the end result and especially all the encouragement keeps me going. Thanks Cynthia for the kind words.

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  13. impeccable writing laxmi- I love your train of thoughts :)

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    1. You are sweet Priya. Thank you:)

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  14. Intense feelings intricately woven.

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    1. You are too Cindy, you keep being amazed which keeps me going!

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  16. No worries. The sprouts have grown to full blown foliage in your writing! Good going! :)

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    1. Thanks Mom - I mean thanks Shail :-))

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  17. Oh wow, I am really enjoying there. You have a way with words :)
    Happy A to Z!

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  18. A big thanks for stopping by and the wow :-)) Keep treading this way - pretty please:)

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  19. It's insane how you do this! In a good way!! :)

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  20. Just how you ladies come up with beautiful poetry is beyond me. Stumped!

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  21. Fabulous. What a lovely poem.
    Donna

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  22. Impressive as it can get...
    Ideation at its best :D : D

    Imagery germinating in the soil of feelings
    Immensely turmoils the insides,
    In a fight to unfold the ode.

    ah ... ! that was particularly beautiful :D

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