Friday, April 05, 2013

Day 6 - F for Farce


Fighting to get you out,

Faint thoughts, reeling in my head, like a

Ferris wheel's generous spins.

Freeze for a moment, let me

Fathom the fragments of your form,

Flash again, your flecks -

For a longer second.

Fixed on the fringes of your

Full-length image, I can

Fuel my fragile facilities,

Freely graze on your fiery fabric,

Focus and forge, force and feign

Fairly fine lines -

Forming a facade to

Falsely flatter my failing skills,

Feeling fulfilled for a funny verse!

41 comments:

  1. Nice...I can see those ideas churning in your head! :)

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  2. And, you say this is effortless! Wow! :)

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    1. Well, compared to E it was...it really came out in one go. Sometimes it just happens, sometimes it never happens no matter what! KWIM?? ;-)

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  3. Wow! How do you write this?

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    1. The pressure is mounting...I dunno how far I can keep the pattern - I can see some really challenging letters ahead for this kind of treatment..Thank for the Wow..I personally thought it was very lame ;-)

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  4. cool; surely this must have taken a little effort ? loved this laxmi !

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    1. Nada...no writer's block today, now E was a completely different animal! LOL - Thanks for stopping by Priya:-)

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  5. Fantastic :) I thought you were talking about childbirth, writing is like that sometimes eh?

    Look forward to the rest of the alphabets.

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    1. Oh yeah...nice way of looking at writing :-) thanks for stopping by :)

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  6. Fantabulous! I'm running out of words to comment now!

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  7. Way to go Laxmi. I am rooting for you to do all the twenty six letters this way.

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    1. As much as I can Shail. Trying not to think too much about the harder letters ;-) thank you so much for the encouragement-)

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  8. I have no idea how you do it!

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    1. Honestly Cindy, that is two of us ;-)

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  9. U r a magician with words !
    Like ur unique style

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    1. Aww...you are very generous with praise buddy :-)

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  10. Loved the imagery of the thoughts going round like a ferris wheel. Very nice.

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  11. Fiery , fantastic and fun ! as usual loved it :)

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    1. :-) Thank you Sir. And thank you for the lovely message spread through your F post.

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  12. Faint thoughts, reeling in my head, like a

    Ferris wheel's generous spins.

    Today, these lines were my favorite.

    Damyanti @Daily(w)rite
    Co-host, A to Z Challenge 2013

    Twitter: @AprilA2Z
    #atozchallenge

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    1. Thanks for the encouragement, thanks for co-hosting A-Z. I am having so much fun doing this:-)

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  13. Wow! How on earth do you write stuff like this? Since I am at home, I actually read the lines out loud. It is even more fun that way. You are truly a wizard with verse.

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    1. Wow...that is one of the best things I'd heard about my verse - and coming from you (since I am a big fan of your style), it is a huge compliment. Thanks for stopping by.

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  14. Wow, that's a lot of F words, great job!
    Kathy at Oak Lawn Images

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    1. Thanks Kathy, for stopping by!

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  15. FAB! Fantastic and completely floored!

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    1. Floored I am as well - for your kind praise:-)

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  16. Wow, impressed...you weave magic with those lines!

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    1. Aww...girlie:-) It is nice to see young writers such as you on the blogging scene. Thanks for stopping by.

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  17. Wow,way to tackle these letters, first time I stopped by on the A-Z Challenge and I can't wait to see you tackle the rest of the alphabet. Lucy from Lucy's Reality

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    1. Thank you so much Lucy - Checking out your blog :-)

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  18. freaking fantastic :D

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    1. Flattered and floating (in the air;-)) Thanks much for treading this way:-)

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  19. Such beautiful words in poetry..you weaved magic!

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    1. Aww..You made my day:-) Thanks for stopping by Naina.

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  20. I can see you enjoy this! Focus and forge, yes. That's my takeaway!

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    1. Thanks for the kind words and for stopping by Vidya :-)

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