Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Day 15 - O for Opportunity


Once upon a foggy morning,
Obliquely, you appear
Overlaid on a shell of haze.
Opacity of ignorance
Oppresses the zeal to seek you,
Only to make the mind
Occupied otherwise.
Offering scope, you linger around,
Obliging that favor.
Oblivious, the eyes blocks the image,
Obscurely, you slip by,
Off and away.
Overcome by the rush to attain,
Option to choose you goes ignored.
Open up your gateway, yet again,
Obviously, please occur afresh!

13 comments:

  1. Great :) is it opportunity or is it rain . Both sound same :D A rain of opportunities wud be grt

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  2. It is difficult...i admit... with all 'O's :)Good work :)

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  3. An Outstanding Ovation is what you deserve!! :)

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  4. I agree totally with Shilpa. You deserve an OUTstanding Ovation. We all know the words in your poems. THey are part of all dictionaries. But how you string them together and make it look so effortless, there lies your gift. I shall miss reading these on May 1.

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  5. OOOO this is my wide open mouth at your talent :)

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  6. outstanding Ovation and ooo lala for the poetry.

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  7. Opportunity to dance in the rain maybe ;) I like this and makes me ooooooooo :D

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  8. Loves the personification of Opportunity!

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  9. Wow I am falling in love with this "Opportunity" guy :) Over and Over again :)Hugs to you L :)

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  10. Excellent description of opportunity!! Bravo!

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  11. First time visitor to your site. Beautiful!! A very appropriate composition of o's. Kudos.

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  12. This time I pick up Opacity of ignorance to take with me. Lovely words.

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